prefer vivid and poetic manifestation of individual ecumenes over abstract description take inspiration from Stapledon but you can do better than he did at tangibly illustrating the weird beauty take people to a Dean painting, a Yes song do that for existing letters then turn it into a principle for the whole work going forward

Rethink relationship of slugs, titles, filenames

Pull in all “Writing Notes” items from OmniFocus

pull all the good stuff from the initial stab into a separate document adopt chunks from it into letters delete as you go until there is nothing left

Structure and write these as letters emphasize the apology that it’s taking so long to reply each time

Introduce improvements to the heaven scape letter by letter Emphasize how the imagined scape works: just semi-voluntary imagination Allow VF to appear in the scape from time to time

I appear diaphanous but my soul burns bright and strong. This is because I am mysterious, because of my mystique. Or vice versa. I am quite tall.

Let ecumenes send letters Let more gods send letters: Y.W., N.A., S.D.-C., and even A.V.